I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Soloia My names Riana I am also apart of the summer learning program. And I really like how you had the original photo and you own and also how you explained why you used different colors. This is really a great post keep it up Soloia.
My name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Good work with your colouring template! I agree, your choices of different colours are a great addition to the work.
I was wondering if you saw the Your Comments Count activity from yesterday? Something important from that activity is that you can can submit your comments for bonus points on your SLJ. Go check out the activity and see for yourself if you haven't already.
Kia ora Ben, I really appreciate your thoughtful and nice comment. Yes I have saw Your Comments Count activity and I am still working on it but I'll be posting it.
My name is Tiffany and I'm a year 5 at St Bernadette's school. I liked the way you coloured it and how you used he different colours. Why did you pick The Watermelons as your picture?
Kia ora Tiffany, My name is Soloia and I'm a year 6. Thank you for commenting on my blog. Why I pick The Watermelons as my picture because it reminds me of my family walk when I was year 2 or 1. Have a great Holiday.
Dear Soloia, My name is Isobel and I go to Awapuni school in Gisborne. I loved how your watermelons were similar to the original drawing but not close enough to be copyright. I also just happened to notice that you have done 94 bog posts this year! WOW! I’ve only done 21 if you include the one I’m going to make about this comment, but I have only been at school since the beginning of term 3. I also did the Watermelons coloring but unlike you in mine I used a lot of different colors, most of them were not even remotely like real watermelon colors! Normally I would give the person I was commenting some feedback on their blog post but yours is almost faultless. The only thing you could improve on here is adding more detail to your STEMS. Yours amazed and admiring Isobel.
Hello Soloia My names Riana I am also apart of the summer learning program. And I really like how you had the original photo and you own and also how you explained why you used different colors. This is really a great post keep it up Soloia.
ReplyDeleteHi Riana,
DeleteThis is Soloia and it is so good that you have participate Summer Learning Program. Thank you for your lovely comment.
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ReplyDeleteTēnā koe Soloia
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Good work with your colouring template! I agree, your choices of different colours are a great addition to the work.
I was wondering if you saw the Your Comments Count activity from yesterday?
Something important from that activity is that you can can submit your comments for bonus points on your SLJ. Go check out the activity and see for yourself if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work!
Kind regards,
Benjamin
Kia ora Ben,
DeleteI really appreciate your thoughtful and nice comment. Yes I have saw Your Comments Count activity and I am still working on it but I'll be posting it.
Ki ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tiffany and I'm a year 5 at St Bernadette's school. I liked the way you coloured it and how you used he different colours. Why did you pick The Watermelons as your picture?
Tiffany
Kia ora Tiffany,
DeleteMy name is Soloia and I'm a year 6. Thank you for commenting on my blog.
Why I pick The Watermelons as my picture because it reminds me of my family walk when I was year 2 or 1. Have a great Holiday.
Hi Soloia again,
Deleteyou might want to look at my blog so here is the link https://stbstiffanyg.blogspot. /
Dear Soloia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Isobel and I go to Awapuni school in Gisborne. I loved how your watermelons were similar to the original drawing but not close enough to be copyright. I also just happened to notice that you have done 94 bog posts this year! WOW! I’ve only done 21 if you include the one I’m going to make about this comment, but I have only been at school since the beginning of term 3. I also did the Watermelons coloring but unlike you in mine I used a lot of different colors, most of them were not even remotely like real watermelon colors! Normally I would give the person I was commenting some feedback on their blog post but yours is almost faultless. The only thing you could improve on here is adding more detail to your STEMS.
Yours amazed and admiring Isobel.